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Review:Hailee Key says:
It was a good chapter. I find very interesting to know the reason why the map was created in the first place. Not every fanfiction explains it.
I agree that sometimes it feels rushed but it's fine. I'd like to see what happens with Mary and Marlene in the next chapter. In this one you didn't really tell us. Update fast ;)

Author's Response: So sorry on the slow updates! I'll try next chapter to not make it rushed... really sorry about that. I might go over chapters and re-do some of them.
Don't worry the next chapter explains what happens to Mary and Marlene. Though I'll just say this that Mary won't be in very many chapters for the rest of this term/year (not really sure how long I haven't decided :D ) There will have an update finished by Wednesday :D
Thanks for the review and your honesty :D you're brill :)

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