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Review:IlUvPuRpLeandHaRrYPoTtEr0702 says:
Why did you put a big gap between stories. One story is on Christmas 1973 then you just jump to April 1975. You should try to keep the dates only weeks or months apart. 2 years is too long.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review.

As the summary of the story describes, this is a series of moments and aren't like chapters in a novel. Not all moments are perfectly timed, and if I wrote perfectly timed chapters just for the sake of consistency, they would become pointless fillers that would bore both the reader and myself. Furthermore, while this is a short story collection, all of the short stories do have a common theme: they're the moments Remus wanted Emmeline to stay. They happen more frequently as they mature, develop an even deeper friendship, and begin dealing with more grown-up situations, but they're still a bit young now. That's why I skipped their first two years at Hogwarts; they were friends, but nothing out of the ordinary happened - at least not in my head canon.

I hope this answers your question! :)

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