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Review:AlexFan says:
So let me just get the squealing out of the way right now. Ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh there's a new chapter and things are going to happen!

Good for Dom, she's got the proper reaction to finding out that her own boss did this to her. Although if I was her I'd be a lot more homicidal when I found out. And then Teddy comes in, the voice of reason as always and telling Dom that she can't just do something reckless and barge into the ministry all willy-nilly.

I think Teddy and Dom make a good couple, they balance each other out and seem to be each other's voice of reason when the other is thinking of doing something stupid or reckless. I like that you have them communicating and working together as that is how a relationship is supposed to work. More often than not an OC character would probably run away and not say anything.

I'm not that surprised that Wilson Young agreed to confessing so easily. His living arrangements sound horrible and clearly he'll do anything to get a better life if the fact that he agreed to commit a crime for some gold is anything to go by.

I think Hermione could try to brew the Wolfbane's Potion. I know that she's not a licensed Potioneer but she did brew the Polyjuice Potion in second year successfully so I'm thinking she can do anything. If not, there are always Healer's at St. Mungo's that would be able to help out.

That last line though, stuff is going to hit the ceiling (and I can't say what because it's not 12+) and jush AH! I'm so incredibly excited for the next chapter and to see Delilah's reaction and what she's going to say and do.

Author's Response: Hey! It's always such a pleasure to read your reviews, thank you xD

I am pleased you think Dom had the proper reaction, haha. She'd have been even more homicidal had Teddy not intervened xP

Teddy and Dom do balance each other out, and I am glad you could see that here. Haha I hate those kind of OC characters that run away and don't say stuff xP

Indeed, Wilson Young is not really in the best stage of his life right now so he'd probably agree to anything.

As to how Dominique gets "help" before her transformation, I won't say much, but you'll see it in the future chapter =)

Haha I am pretty excited for the next chapter too, though I'm the one writing it. I am glad you liked this chapter and look forward to more of your reviews!


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