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Review:quixotic says:
Hi! I'm here to review your entry for the Death Eater Challenge!

This is one of the most darkest things that I have ever read. I was literally shaking with fear by the end of it. Your description is so good in some areas, especially during the part about the walls of Azkaban. It showed exactly how insane Mulciber had become.

I've read a lot of entries in this challenge that try and analyze why a Death Eater turned out so bad. You just jumped into the story saying that Mulciber was evil, no two ways around it. He deserved the punishment he got. And what a scary punishment that was. I found myself feeling irrationally sad for Mulciber (I'm such a pussy) because of what he had to go through for the rest of his life. For eternity. It is just me or does that word have an amount of spookiness attached to it?

It was a beautifully written story that was a pleasure to read. Thanks for participating in my challenge!

Author's Response: Hello there!

Yes, this piece ended up being very dark, although writing his descent to madness was rather enjoyable (and I may have worsened his suffering because I wrote this on a rather uncomfortable airplane ride).

In the three earlier chapters, I really tried to soften up each character, and show that they weren't really all that bad, but I decided it was high time for a character that was really a baddie all along. :)

Thanks for the review, and for such an awesome challenge!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)


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