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Review:silverashes says:
Hello again!

You've continued to make the story line/plot even more interesting. I loved this chapter even more than the first one! One of the things I like the most is that all of the Dark-Lord turmoil is beginning to happen in the background, but Amelia, Orly, and the rest of family/friends are still living their lives normally. I've never read a book that takes a look into the way life was just before the Dark Lord took his reign. I think it's a really interesting perspective because we can see how it is slowly starting to affect everyone. Edgar is nervous about his pro-Muggle work hurting his wife, children, and sister. It's all starting! I really like it!

I really like Amelia too! You've characterized her really well! I loved learning about what happened the night she and Fabian ended up in bed together. I thought the background information cleared up any questions I had about the two of them! It's flowing really nicely so far! There aren't any confusing patches, and it's very, very interesting! I can't find anything wrong with it, not even grammar!

Brilliant chapter!

xx Rachel

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I got super excited to see that we had a review! Sorry I didn't respond to the last one, I've been extremely busy. And I'm super glad you enjoyed the chapter! There is plenty more excitement to come so get ready!

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