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Review:quixotic says:
Hi! I'm here to review your entry for the Death Eater Challenge. Gosh, sorry for the long wait!

Barty Crouch Jr. is my favourite Death Eater of the lot (the fact that David Tenant plays him in the movies could have have been a motivating factor).

In your story, Barty is shown growing up as a boy who craved for his father's love and a little of his father's time. It's heart breaking to see how his father failed to give him this every time. Yet Barty keeps giving his father just another chance. Getting sent to Azkaban was the final straw, I suppose, and then he finally gives up. I can imagine what a brilliant wizard Barty could have been had he had a better childhood.

My favourite part of the story is the beginning just because the hope and innocence in Barty's voice is so evident. He seems like a completely different Barty as opposed to the one in the Goblet of Fire. He's a bright ambitious boy who seems to love the job his father occupies. Perhaps Barty would have made a great Minister of Magic. You've shown how Winky was his sole friend, confident and caretaker. All of this in the first 18 lines. Woah.

To conclude, it was a great story to read and review! Thank you so much for participating in my challenge.

Author's Response: Hello, don't worry about the wait, you're here now and that's what counts!

Haha, that probably plays a big part in why I like him too, so don't worry about that at all!

I'm really glad that you got the gist of what I was trying to do in this story because it's the first time I ever tried something like this so I didn't really know whether it would work or not. I know, I can imagine too, and that's what made it even sadder.

I'm glad you liked that part because that's what I worked hardest at to weave into the story. Haha, sorry I bombarded you with so much in a short space I just wanted to show how much people can change due to circumstances.

Thank you for a wonderful review and choosing me to come second, it meant a lot!!

-Kiana


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