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Review:ClaireAsh2617 says:
I'm carrying on here!

I loved the development of Ellie, really getting to know her in this chapter with all the running etc and her disdain for the boys! Shows that even though she might not get along with Albus, she accepts the fact her brother is friends and isn't majorly difficult!

Showing her actual friends makes you realise that she's not someone who pushes everyone away, which is nice, but she seems to choose wisely!

The way the chapter ends doesn't shed any light on what's going to happen which keeps you guessing, but you can see that something's coming! It's intriguing!

Good job!

Author's Response: YOU'RE BACK! WOOHOO!

:D I thought that a little bit more character development was required with Ellie, especially concerning her little character quirks!

Once again, you've hit the nail right on the head! Ellie is VERY picky when it comes to whom she lets in - more on that later!

And I hope to give more insight to the plot in the next chapter!

Thank you!


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