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Review:potterfan310 says:
Me again :)

Oh Louis, trying to speak to Jo when she is clearly wanting to leave already for her break.

Compared to Louis, Patrick really does sound hot ;)

Talk about awkward, having your ex listen to your conversation with your soon to be date.

It's cute Jo's got a badger on her shoulder, I'm guessing she was a Hufflepuff at Hogwarts then?

Oh my god!! Bombshell alert. Louis was going to propose to her, squee! Oh Louis, if you were going to propose why sleep with someone else :/

I can't wait for the next chapter since I'm loving this story and all your characters especially Jo and Narcissa (I love her characterisation by the way!)

Soph :D

Author's Response: Hello!

Poor Jo :P Louis just doesn't know when to quit, does he? He just won't leave them alone!
And yeah, I also said in the first chapter that Jo was a Hufflepuff at Hogwarts, but I mainly put the tattoo in so I could have Narcissa being disapproving :P

I KNOW BOMBSHELL! It's such a shock I didn't even plan it, it just kind of slipped out my fingers :P

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Soph! It means a lot.

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