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Review:ClaireAsh2617 says:
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This one really interested me! Regulus turning up, what a twist in only the 2nd chapter! You introduced him well and Ellie's reaction was brilliant - you can tell she's not always pleased with her gift! Makes it more believable considering she's a teenage girl! And her needing him makes you question what's happening next, always a good way to go!

Ginny being her mother figure gets you "right in the feels" love that line! Shows how Ellie does need a mother figure around but she tries not to admit it, and shows there are more people who care about her!

Another really well written chapter! :)

Author's Response: I really hope that by introducing Regulus so early in the story, I haven't used up all my plot twists! I'm glad you liked Ellie's reaction - it's not her typical one, but I wanted to show vulnerability in her character early on.

And you've hit the nail right on the head concerning Ellie and mother figures! I'm glad that came through!

Thanks for the review!

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