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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hey! I'm here with the first of your (very late!) prize reviews from my challenge.

This is a really good first chapter. You've given just a little detail away about each of the characters to keep me interested but not too much so that the first chapter is an information dump which is a tough thing to do, so well done! I also like the little bit of mystery that you've created around Scorpius and Rose too.

Rose's friends seem great too, the comedy between them added to the chapter and I hope we see more of that in later chapters!


Author's Response: Dee! :) Hello.

Thank you so much :) I know that it is quite a short first chapter, but this was the first thing I ever posted and I wasn't sure about how it would be received. I'm glad you liked how I've described them. As for the mystery, you don't have to wait long. I promise! :)

Thank you :) More on her friends, and more friends coming up!

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