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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello! I do really intend to keep reading this, although I think it'll be in little sections every few weeks at this rate - real life, you know how it goes. But don't worry, I'm not giving up on it!

I loved the first scene where Ginny put Caroline Mclaggen's helmet on for her when Caroline was just fixing her hair repeatedly. Haha that's so like Ginny, she's not going to take that from anyone.

I like how you set up Ginny's future career with the Holyhead Harpies by having Gwenog Jones come to watch a match! I'd love to know why she was there though - I feel like professional Quidditch players don't often go to Hogwarts games, but I guess they must scout players from somewhere!

Also, the part about the Death Eaters... You know, it's weird, I had never really thought about the Death Eaters after Voldemort's downfall. For some odd reason I just assumed that everything was all fine at Hogwarts again after Voldemort died, and never considered the fact that of course the Death Eaters were still around and some of them would try to keep going with Voldemort's plan - maybe try to be the next Voldy or something.

Great chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: I know how real life can get, believe me! I'm just really, really happy to see you back! :)

I could really feel Ginny's frustration when I wrote that scene, haha ;) I just wanted to put Caroline in her place, a little bit.

I imagine that they'll come and scout players at Hogwarts, especially towards the end of the school years. And especially when someone (like Ginny) has been playing extraordinarily all season. Although they can't find enough players at Hogwarts to fill all the teams in the league, so I suppose they look elsewhere as well.

I wish that everything would be fine after Voldemort's death, but I can't imagine them being able to catch all the Death Eaters at once. After all, many of them are very skilled witches and wizards, so I can see them slipping through the hands of the Aurors etc.

I am really happy to hear that you liked this chapter! I feel so insecure about these early ones, haha ;) I'm definitely looking forward to seeing you back (but I understand that life gets busy too). :) Thank you so much for this review!!!

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