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Review:marauderfan says:
Hi there! Here with your requested review!

I really liked this chapter. The flashback to how Vic found out about Teddy and Dominique was cute! And the end :( I hope everything will be all right between her and Teddy! I'm glad she seems to be finally done pushing people away, at least.

So. Delilah Jones. At first she seemed all right, and I liked her, because she seemed genuinely concerned about Dom, and was treating her the same as before, just talking about work as they always do. And then she started going on about how she hoped Dom's interview notes survived the encounter with the werewolves. INTERVIEW NOTES. That's what she cares about, is the article? And not the fact that her senior journalist is FREAKING OUT BECAUSE SHE JUST GOT TURNED INTO A WEREWOLF. !!! Excuse the capslock but I just want to hop into the story and give Delilah a talking-to. Ugh. I don't like her! And of course Dom can't do much about it unless she wants to lose her job. (Maybe she should work for the Quibbler instead. I bet they'd be nicer.)

There was one place you might want to fix the wording: However, she had not seen him since three days.
"Since three days" should either be "for three days" or "since three days ago".

Anyway, you've got such an exciting story here and it's really starting to build up now! I'm looking forward to reading more! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you liked this chapter and liked the flashback. Yeah Dom is done pushing people away, I am glad too xP

Delilah Jones is a complex, and I'll admit it, an unlikeable character. Haha I am pleased you're so into the story that you want to lecture Deliah. I am sure she could do with one xP Quibbler would be nicer yeah, but it;'s just not the place for Dom haha.

Oh thanks for pointing out that error, I'll definitely fix it.

I am happy you're enjoying the story. Thank you!


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