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Review:potterfan310 says:
I'm really intrigued about what happened between Jo and Louis, but it must be awful if he cheated on her.

Do I detect a crush?? Me thinks Patrick may have one on Jo, he seems like a really sweet guy. From your description he reminds me a little of Ben Barnes or even a young Sirius.

A magical hotel, of course there's bound to have something crazy happen.

"Jo was trying to discreetly stab guests with the heels of her shoes." - I really love this line, it just adds even more crazy to the hotel and to Jo's personality!

I really, really LOVE your take on Narcissa, she is pure brilliance! And I have a feeling she is not going to be all too happy about the chimera spitting fire all over her polished floors :P

Whoo for Charlie, you never see enough of him in fics and I always feel he gets left out. So glad he's here thought!

I love how Ron is just blunt to about things to Louis. I wonder why he came down if he knew nothing about the magical creature. Maybe hoping to catch a glimpse of Jo?

This is such a unique story and I LOVE IT even though I'm two chapters in! :)

Off onto chapter three.

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph :D

Author's Response: Personally, I absolutely hate Louis, but as a person he's really not too bad. I'm sure many people have strayed when their partner wasn't around a lot, and while that doesn't excuse cheating, its something that happens quite a lot and hopefully lets you understand Louis a bit more. He's just a normal guy who made a mistake.

I'm glad you like that line, it's one of those lines I am very proud of. Bless Jo- and that poor hotel has probably seen a lot of crazy!(Shameless self promotion: if you like Charlie I have a fic centered on him called Acting the Part) And Ron came down because he liked to help and I wanted the Golden Trio all in one place :P Plus he is an Auror and I wanted his bluntness. :P

I am so very glad you like it, thank you very much for the reading and reviewing!


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