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Review:Hailee Key says:
This is fantastic! I love it. Perfect chapter! Dumbledore will obviously expell Avery thanks to Marlene. But who were the other two boys? Will they seek for revenge? I don't think they will find it very funny that Marlene has gotten one of their friends expelled.
And the new defense teacher? She seems like quite a character! I think she is secretly a death eater or something as she's shown multiple times her hatred towards Griffindor! Also, she was already angry with Marlene so...will she be like an Umbridge or even worse?
Poor, poor Mary! Please, make her be fine! She HAS to be fine.
I wonder which will be the reaction of the Marauders. I smell some evil pranks for the Slytherins ;)

Author's Response: Yeah Dumbledore will expel Avery, but where do you think Avery will go as soon as he's expelled?
You'll see more of their defence against that dark art teacher soon (in a few chapters maybe). But I think she might give Umbridge a run for her money with their evilness :P
Mary might be fine, Mary might not be fine but I'll just tell you it might be awhile before we see her again (conscious at least)
The marauders will be blaming a particular person on this and Sirius will be getting his own back on that person. and of course in the infamous map will be created very shortly :P
Thanks for reviewing, you're great. The next chapter is waiting for validation now so it should be up shortly :D

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