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Review:purplepotter77 says:
Ugh, cliffhanger endings are my ruination. But wow, what an interesting chapter!

I loved Lorcan! I had been wondering while reading the 2nd and 3rd chapters whether or not he was going to make an appearance again, and I'm glad to see he did! Lorcan seems like such a fun, easygoing person. Usually the Scamander twins are characterized as just like Luna, but here you've managed to keep some of the Luna-ness without making it too overtly so.

Rose, Scorpius, and Dalila were great as usual. I'm so glad we got to learn a bit more about Rose and Scorpius' relationship (due to the pestering of Lorcan, of course). "It was all inconsequential to the possible pain Ros-the others could be feeling, he thought." also gave another insight into how Scorpius thinks about Rose. I can't wait for more ScoRose to come (though I suppose it has to take time for their relationship to develop a bit more).

Again, great job with the detail and description! The way the sandstorm was described really helped me picture it and helped me imagine I was there with them. Overall, really lovely job with this chapter. Feel free to request for more reviews when the next chapter comes out!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I'm nearly over with my travels and the next chapter will be posted on Wednesday!

I'm so glad that you loved him! Yay that's what I wanted him to be like so I'm glad it came through here! I didn't really want him to be like Luna because I can't write her at all, plus it was more fun making him unlike her!

Yes, you will learn more about their relationship throughout this story and Lorcan will continue to be the matchmaker :P With them now being apart it will mean they will think about the other more, so you'll be luck!

Thank you for all of these wonderful reviews, you really outdid yourself! I'll definitely be back on Wednesday to claim another!


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