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Review:purplepotter77 says:
Yay, Rose is in Egypt now! I've never been to Egypt before, but it sounds amazing, and I've always loved Egyptian mythology and history.

Poor Rose, withering in the heat! Dalila seems like a very sweet and shy person. It was also nice how she didn't recognize the name Weasley (or maybe she did, but they just weren't as famous in Egypt). I feel like perhaps if Dalila didn't react to Rose's surname, then a lot of other people Rose would meet in Egypt might not, either. That's great for Rose, since she has a chance to make a name for herself in Egypt without being overshadowed by more famous family members.

The background information on Rose and Scorpius and their years at Hogwarts definitely added more to Rose's characterization and answered some of the questions I had in the last chapter about Scorpius. I can totally see Rose as a Gryffindor, especially with her forwardness in asking Dalila for an interview and her eagerness to travel to Egypt.

One of your concerns was whether Rose's thoughts at the beginning of the chapter match those at the end, and I completely forgot to answer that in the last review, so I'll address it now! Obviously her actual thoughts are different, but I think both in this chapter and the last chapter, her voice (her thought-voice thingy, if that makes sense) matches, and I feel like you have a great grasp on her characterization!

I loved how Rose ran into Scorpius and mistook him as a tourist. The idea of him being a curse-breaker and how he was in Ravenclaw are both things I've never seen in fanfic, so once again, great job with the originality aspect! I can't wait to see more of his characterization and the romance between him and Rose. I think you've rekindled my love of ScoRose again!

Another great chapter; I'm off to read the next one! :)

Author's Response: Hello again!

Neither her, but I also love those things too which is a big motivating factor for me to write this!

Yay that's exactly how I wanted Dalila to come across! I never really thought about the fame abroad before writing this but my theory is that they were famous when it happened but the next generation probably only know fragments of it, so that's why there wasn't such a reaction to the name. Hmm, I can't say much but they will reappear in future chapters!

I'm glad that you liked the background information as I was worried it was going to be a little tedious! It was strange writing her as a Gryffindor because my head canon is that she's a Ravenclaw but the story just didn't seem to work with her being a Claw.

Haha, it does make sense, don't worry! I'm glad that her voice follows through because it's always so much harder to tell when your writing it yourself as opposed to being the reader!

Yeah I may be a little bit in love with Scorpius so my head canon is that he's this dark and broody guy so a cursebreaker seemed to fit with that. I'm glad that I can rekindle your love as they really are an awesome ship!

Thanks for another amazing review! ♥

-Kiana


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