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Review:Pheonix Potioneer says:
I wonder how Professor Sinistra punished the 3 Slytherin boys. It looks like it was rather harsh, but you never mentioned the exact punishment.

When Albus is saying that he has done way better than expected, on "way" the italic symbols show.

I see why Fionnuala is in Ravenclaw. She spends so much time thinking about things and questions and knowledge, that she doesn't pay attention.

I'm not used to be told of by teachers either. There would also be kids that were worst than me, so they never told me off for minor things I did, like running in the hallways.

Albus made the team! But now he has a lot more pressure on his shoulders.

Albus also needs more confidence. (desperately!) I think I mentioned it before though.

The match against Slytherin is coming! I hope Albus does well.

Another great chapter, as usual!

Author's Response: Thanks.

And thanks for pointing out those italics. I've removed them now. *sighs* They keep seeming to elude me.

The chances are Rose wouldn't know how Sinistra punished the Slytherins, but I might bring a mention of it into the next chapter if I get a chance.

Glad the part about Fionnuala being in Ravenclaw was clear. That was the impression I meant to give. She's smart, but just not necessarily focussed on what she should be.

The Ravenclaw versus Slytherin match will probably be the chapter after next. There's a full moon to get through first (*grins*). There might be a surprise or two in the match actually.

Albus does need more confidence. Must be hard to have a father who's a war hero, a mother who played sport professionally, an aunt who's a genius and helping to reorganise the Ministry and an older brother who's is outgoing and a rather larger than life character.

This is giving a bit of a hint at the next year, but must be even worse for Lily. I mean, if she does well in school, that's nothing special because Albus has already done it. If she goofs off, James has already done that. Both of her brothers have already made the team. If she gets into Gyffindor, well James is already there and if she's in a different house, that's not special either because so is Albus.

And yeah, if you've a reputation for being responsible and well-behaved, teachers tend to overlook a certain amount of minor stuff.

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