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Review:BLONDEbehaviour says:
Hi ! I've seen your story mentioned on the forum a few times and thought id come and have a read of it :)

First off, its really good !! I'm totally captivated and have now favourited (is that a word?) it hoping for more. Your description of detail is really good, especially when you were explaining her situation in the second paragraph. I had such a good picture in my head, well done!

I found it particularly edgey that she's a muggleborn! its a good twist, especially when she has interacted with Slytherins in the past, i'm not sure if you mention it but will be interested in knowing what her house is.

All in all i'm so happy i did come and have a look at your story, i'm definitely already enjoying it. Please continue! :)

Blondie x

Author's Response: Oh wow! This is such a nice review, thank you!
I always have concerns in my head about my writing style and weather or not I have not explained things enough or if I am over detailling my work so it's great to know that you think such great things about my story!
Chp.2 is in validation so I would love to know what you think (shamless way to ask for you to not to abandon this story) haha

Thank you!

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