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Review:Courtney Dark says:

I probably didn't need to write that chapter all in capitals, but there you go: EMPHASIS! Anyway, in case you can't tell already, I loved this chapter - so many feels! Sigh. Yay for Sneth moments!

I can't believe Beth told Severus about Lily being pregnant! She has rather loose lips actually - she's as bad as James or Sirius! Well, not quite as bad, because she's (usually) a cautious person by nature, I think. I LOVE HER SO MUCH! She feels so real!

And all the shippiness (I don't think that's a word, but that's okay!) in this chapter was just amazing! I almost died when Beth hugged Severus. And then I actually died when Severus gave her that bracelet. And then I was reborn as a vampire and died again when he put the bracelet on her wrist.

And then that end section! I loved it, but at the same time it gave me the shivers, because it reminded me how much danger Beth and Severus would be in if the wrong person, from either side, found out what they were doing. And it also (weirdly enough) made me smile, because it reminded me of Snape giving Harry those disastrous Occlumency lessons.

Sorry for the extremely random review.


Author's Response: YAY BETH'S BIRTHDAY AND SEVERUS AND THE BRACELET. *hugs chapter alongside you* Sneth moments aren't perhaps as frequent as some people would like, but romance doesn't always progress the way we want it to, does it?

I think Beth just blurted out Lily's pregnancy because she was nervous and didn't know what else to say, poor girl. But OH MY GOSH, I'm so glad she feels real for you! That's of course a huge concern when you introduce an original character, but I've written so much about her that she almost does feel real to me, too. It just makes me smile like mad to hear reviewers -- completely strangers, really -- have been sold on my depiction of her.

Keep an eye on that bracelet, by the way. ;) It does crop up again in Breaking Even, and it's actually pretty important in ways even my up-to-date readers haven't quite found out!

I can't wait for you to get to certain parts of this story, and the next one -- you're touching on things that get addressed, and I really hope you'll like them. Thank you for reviewing!

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