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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I am so very excited that you entered my challenge, and I am SO very sorry that I'm SO late in giving you this review!!

For starters, I thought that this was a really original idea. In the fanfiction realm, I've always seen Peter either paired off with Mary McDonald or some random OC, or just completely alone and single and friendless. This is different. This story gets inside his head, offers a possible explanation for his actions, and explores a facet of his character that maybe hasn't been explored before.

I think that's really awesome. And I think that you used the quote that I gave you to its full advantage! It definitely worked, because in this case, Peter was truly the one who loved James first, and didn't really receive much love in return. It's nostalgic, like the song, because they both reflect on something that has ended, a relationship, severed by the end of a life or the end of an era. And like the story of Samson and Delilah, Peter's story can be seen from a totally new perspective. Perhaps Peter is just as misunderstood as Delilah was--perhaps they are both villains by accident. Who knows?!

Excellent job! I'm so glad that you wrote this! :)

May your pen never run out of ink!

~UnluckyStar57

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