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Review:kevin says:
I am really enjoying this series. Your "Seals of Chaos" was very good and I am really enjoying he characters in this series also. Alexander is a very creative character - kudos to you for coming up with such an original idea! Your notes mention you are French - I commend you on your English! I am an American who only studied French for 2 years in school (many years ago) - I could never imagine writing 2 novels in French to the degree you do in English! Bravo! When I first started reading "Seal of Chaos" the only clue I had that you might be writing in a second language was your verb conjugation - every once in a while I would catch you writing "to listen" instead of "listening" or something like that. I am not an English teacher, so I can't tell you what that is called, but it is the only "corrective critique" that I can offer, since everything else you write is fantastic! Keep up the good work! I see you just posted a couple of weeks ago - when do think the next chapter will be out? I can't wait to read it!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your kind words. I'm glad when my original characters are appreciated. But the thing is that I kinda cheated for Alexander. He was a character I had developped for an original story. I had time to flesh him out quite a bit, until I decided to include him in this fanfic. Still, I'll shamelessly admit I'm kind of proud of him, :)

I've posted the next bit and it's pending validation. I'm currently trying to work on a larger scale, and finish up the whole story before to post any new material. It shouldn't be too long, since this is a rewrite and most of the major changes I've made on the story took place in the earlier chapters. this should be a smoother work, from now on, but I'm still facing writer's blocks and overstacked schedules with real life!
Thanks for your support, anyway.

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