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Review:MargaretLane says:
Love the way the 5th years are less enthusiastic about Hogsmeade than the 3rd years. It's hardly surprising.

*laughs at 3rd year being easy until Balladanis went insane*

Looks like there's another adventurous trio coming along. I guess it's hardly surprising considering Lily and Hugo's background. Some things though are better not being solved.

I wonder if there's an ominous side to this, like that Lily, Hugo and Ashtyn are going to find something out or threaten Matt's privacy in some way. Unintentionally, obviously. The part about not telling Matt has a sort of ominous ring to it.

And *grins* that's rather amusing how students tend not to get minor ailments the days of the Hogsmeades trips. It's a bit like how nobody was ever absent from school on the day of the tour in primary school. (I don't know if ye had school tours, but here it's usual for primary schools to take each class away somewhere for a day at the end of each school year.)

Hmm, Burke's reactions here are pretty weird. I had wondered if he were deliberately harming Matt, although I couldn't imagine why he'd POSSIBLY want to do that. But he does seem genuine here. It's crossed my mind somebody ELSE might be tampering with it, but I doubt that since if it were, Burke would probably end up creating a potion that DOES work and that can't happen. But at the same time, I feel there must be a mystery here, beyond "potion just isn't working." There's too much emphasis on it and Burke seems pretty confused as to why it isn't working. I can't think what it could be though.

*laughs at Madame Pomfrey saying he shouldn't have been given the job*

I'm looking forward to seeing the prank too. I was hoping it would take place in this chapter. Oh well, something to look forward to in next week's instalment.

Author's Response: Everything gets old after a while, even Hogsmeade. Sleep is far more enticing, especially since Albus is so busy all the time.

Haha, none of their years have been easy. Balladanis certainly didn't help! And unfortunately he's still around in the Ministry, so they haven't seen the last of him.

Lily, Hugo, and Ashtyn are very much like their siblings in terms of curiosity.

It's exactly like that! We had field trips in elementary school, and the end of year ones were usually go a park.

If Burke seems genuine, then perhaps he really is genuine. The students aren't wrong when they say he's a bit mad, because he is, and that's part of what's contributing to his reactions.

I hope you enjoy the prank chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


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