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Review:MC_HK says:
I definitely like how you introduced the characters in this chapter. I think you have the personalities (what little I saw of them) pretty well done. I'm very excited that you executed Teddy's transformations so well, and I thought that you made Dom quite, well, real. Her reaction to finding out about her condition is one that is relateable (in a sense that anyone in that situation would be very emotional about it).

"The tissue is charmed to dissolve once the open wound has healed." - This kind of confuses me. Tissue as in flesh or as in a bandage? I think there should be some added clarity here.

Overall, this is a very good chapter. I'm excited to see what comes next! MC_HK

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing again.

I am pleased you liked my introduction of characters and the way I portrayed them. It's a relief to hear that you found Dom real, and liked Teddy as well. I figured that Dom would be very emotional after hearing what happened so yeah.

Oh, I meant tissue as a bandage. I'll make that clearer, thanks for pointing it out.

Thanks again. I'll be re-requesting!

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