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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
I thought I was going to be all sneaky and leave a review on the next chapter, but I just couldn't resist this one!

Minerva!
Minerva had said those words too many times to count, but each time they left her lips it was with the utmost sincerity. Never had she, nor would she, offer someone the comforts of her home without wishing them just that.

That is just, such a McGonagall worth sentence. That one just made me feel all warm on the inside, and again your amount and tender to your description is out of the world. If I could, I would quote each and every word of her perspective in her POV, because it was so well written!

I think by far this is my favourite chapter,it had everything! I love how they were re-assessing them and how you manged to find the good stuff about Peter! Wow. I was bouncing up and down in my seat because the Order's forming!!!

Again, you showed McGonagall's sentiments so well in the few concluding chapters of her point of view, I loved it - she truly is Head, but a mother too.

ALREK! EURGH. I still don't trust him! Why is James being a Gryffie... he should be like Sirius and show the Durmstrang boy the shoulder. Be gone!

I found nothing wrong, though I'm sure Moody has two normal eyes, and loses it after the attack on Frank and Alice, because during Karkaroff's trial, Harry saw in the pensieve that he has both eyes. Not a real biggie though, I know you added that bit about his eye whizzing because you wanted us to actually see the meeting, and only meant to give us description.

Ah, this chapter! :D I loved it!!
Nadia

Author's Response: Hi Miss Nadia!
I had such a hard time getting McGonagall to feel just right. Maybe even more than Dumbledore! But I think after this chapter I was able to get into a more comfortable groove with her.

You're so right about is eye. I've thought about going back and fixing it a handful of times, but don't know where else I have it fake in the story and am sure i would forget to change it! haha!

And yes! I felt like this was one of the first really good looks at the Order we know! I had to make so many notes on who would actually be sitting at that table before I tackled this chapter, haha!

Thank you again SO MUCH you lovely girl ♥


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