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Review:MC_HK says:
This is an awesome chapter. I really like getting into Harley's head a bit, and the interactions between your characters are really well executed. Your description is spot on as well, and you've done a good job of letting me know who is talking which is something I've brought up before and I'm glad to see you're taking it into consideration and improving on that :)

Now for CC.

"she were" should be changed to "she was". You should only use 'were' if you're talking about multiple people.

I know I've seen a few punctuation errors, but they are minor and I'm very happy to see how well edited this is.

Anyways, this is awesome, and I can't wait for your new chapter. MC_HK

Author's Response: Yay, you're back!

I'm glad you liked this one so much. I think this chapter is the first one where I really got to take into account what everyone has said. Thanks for letting me know I'm improving.

I'll be sure to back and fix that, and I'll look for those little grammar problems when I go over this.

Thanks again!

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