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Review:quixotic says:
Hi! I'm here to review your entry for the Death Eater Challenge!

First of all, apologies for the long delay, real life tends to get in the way of everything :(

Lucius is a complicated character. While he is one of Voldemort's most loyal followers, he is also one of the only family men among the Death Eaters. He has to often play a dual role- one as a murderer and the other as a role model for Draco. Reading the Harry Potter books, I realized that it was easy to mix these two roles up a bit, which is exactly what Lucius did.

Getting to your story, I liked how you used a range of time periods to describe Lucius. It portrayed Lucius from all angles. His selfishness, cowardliness as well as his quick thinking skills, loyalty and his love for the ones he held close. Everything flowed really well. Great Job :)

Your description is beautiful, especially during the battle between the Death Eaters and the Aurors. It made the situation come alive :)

Overall, this story was a pleasure to read and review. Thank you so much for participating in my challenge!

Author's Response: Hey there! It's really okay about the late review - I'm so sorry about the late response! Time just slips away sometimes, so I completely understand :)
I'm glad you recognised that Lucius is different from the other Death Eaters - being a family member, plus feeling love. I think it makes him a pretty special character, however I found that I had to take a fair bit into consideration when writing him - I wanted to make sure that all aspects of his personality were included, so we could see that he wasn't completely bad, but he wasn't at all good. I'm so glad it came across for you as a reader, and read well to boot! It means a lot to hear that, especially from the challenge creator! It was a lot of fun to do, so thank you for getting my brain working and leaving such a lovely review - it means a lot :) Thank you so much!

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