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Review:blackballet says:
I think this is a very great stat!

On the forums, you mentioned some pointers on the flow of the chapter. I think you did a very nice job here. It flowed very easily between the few scene changes, so it wasn't anything distracting.

One thing I did find distracting was the use of 'i' instead of 'I'. Make sure you get those! You also spelled Blanc wring the first time you used to it.

But anyway, back to the good stuff. I think it's very interesting that your OC was in Slytherin. We always see those from the other three houses being tortured of imprisoned for information. I think her being a muggleborn plays a big part into her character, as well.

I think you started off the topic of the Holy Grail very nicely. I'm assuming this will be the main plot. I'm almost as excited as the Death Eaters to know what it's about!

Please request again when you can. I'd love to read more.

Author's Response: Oh wow this was quick! Haha thank you!

I'm so glad you think that the flow of this story is good and the scene changes aren't distracting. It was one of my main concerns.

I'll try my very hardest to keep on top of the grammer mistakes, maybe I'll need a BETA reader for that after a few more chapters.
I'm glad you like the way I've placed Imogen in slytherin, I thought it would be interesting for death eaters to torture 'one of their own'.

Thank you so much for this review and the fact you like this story! I will most deffinitly ask for a review again haha :)


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