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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I really enjoyed this chapter, too! It was definitely cool seeing all the action, and I love how eager and enthusiastic Sirius is about all their missions - I think Beth was definitely right when she said that was probably why Dumbledore assigned him the job, as it seems right up Sirius' alley!

I actually love that Sirius appeared at Beth's flat at a ridiculously early time in the morning - it's just so Sirius and I love every single conversation and interaction that he and Beth have with each other. I've definitely got to say that it seems as though, out of all the marauders, Beth is closest with Sirius, despite the fact that she is more open with James with her secrets - but James is a married man now, and has Lily!

You wrote the mission really well - and I liked that we got see a little bit more of Lucius Malfoy, as I love seeing witches and wizards from the other side, love seeing what they're up to! I wonder, more specifically, what exactly they were talking about? I wish Beth and Sirius could've found out more!

Your portrayal of Moody is absolutely fantastic - you have seriously written him just right and I loved the scene between him, Sirius and Beth.

Amazing chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: I love this chapter, if only because -- and I've said this many times -- I have VERY vivid memories of writing it because it was so unconventional. :) The very last day of high school, I drove my dad to a job a couple of hours away and wrote this entire chapter in one sitting, waiting for him in Starbucks. Man, being a writer is awesome.

Sirius and Beth really do have some awesome interaction in this chapter, if I do say so myself! And I imagine that Beth did grow a lot closer to Sirius in the years following Hogwarts, if only because they were around each other a lot by necessity. She's still very good friends with James, though -- there's an unbreakable bond there.

Thank you for saying that about the mission, too! :) Lucius is awesome. I totally loved writing him, and it was because of ToujoursPadfoot he was in here so much in the first place. I wish Beth and Sirius could have found out more, too!

YOU ARE TOO NICE. ♥ I cannot. I have lost the ability to can. Thank you for leaving me such a huge string of such lovely, wonderful reviews!


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