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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Yay! Another chapter!

Wow, that was a terrible start to a review - sorry about that, I seem to be a little brain dead. Of couese there's going to be another chapter, I must have more than thirty left to go! But it was a great one, anyway!

Did I sense some foreshadowing with Peter there? I think I did! He definitely seemed to be on edge like something (insert mysterious dun dun dun) was going on - and James and Sirius and Remus didn't even guess! And Sirius was being so nice to Peter! Well, he was being just a tad mocking, but that's just Sirius! How could Peter betray them?

I should probably stop ranting about Peter's horrible betrayal but GR!

Remus and Sirius know that Lily is pregnant now - yay! And their reactions were just perfect, I loved how excited they were. Although James is really not that great and keeping truths from his best friends.

Beth and Severus! That was definitely my favourite section of the chapter, and I really loved that it was from Severus' point of view. And it was just full of so much fluffy goodness! Although I really cannot imagine Snape in muggle clothing, especially not a t-shirt. I just see him in those black, bat-like robes of his.

But anyway, great chapter!

Author's Response: If you're brain dead, imagine me, trying to answer all of your lovely reviews! :) Which will eventually happen, no matter how much slacking I do in the interim. I promise.

There's loads of Peter foreshadowing in this book! ;) Which means if you think you saw it... you probably did. He's at a very odd point in his life, wavering between loyalties, and it's almost enough to make me feel sorry for him. Almost. (Sirius doesn't know how to be nice without being at least a little mocking. These are facts.)

James is HORRIBLE about keeping truths from his friends, but I get the impression that that's just how the Marauder friendship works. ♥ Honestly, it's a miracle Beth was able to hide her crush on Sev as long as she did, but boys are by nature a tad oblivious.

Snape in Muggle clothing still feels off-kilter for me, and I've been imagining him in that T-shirt for a year and a half! :D Haha!

Thank you for reviewing, as always!!

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