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Review:adluvshp says:
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I quite liked this! I enjoyed your portrayal of Regulus and the way his thoughts run here. You showed the position he was in, very well. I also liked how he hid behind a facade to be deemed fit for his family yet hated everything silently inside. The idea of his true thoughts coming to the surface when thinking of Sirius was really good too.

There were a couple of grammar/spelling errors in this so I think you could do with a thorough re-read or a quick beta. Otherwise, this was well-written and I liked it. Good work.

Cheers,
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think I'll go read it over because I've been meaning to edit my one-shots for a while. I'm glad you liked the short little plot though!

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