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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
WeasleyTwinMom! Hi! YES! NEW STORY!

Okay. A great first chapter! We introduced to the great Molly II and, I love your characterization of her. I mean, she has a mohawk. How hardcore is that? I love how you still made her that "Straight O" student, but she's still her own person and makes her own choices.

And I never thought she would be a Quidditch player. Must be the Weasley blood!

I like McCormack, she seems like a very strong character/coach. I think she's very cool - that's the best word I have to describe her ;)

I cannot wait to read more because I was already excited about this one when you said you had a plot bunny bouncing around, and well, yeah, I anticipate the next!
A brilliant start! :)
Nadia

Author's Response: New story yes! I'm excited about this one, the plot is dancing around in my head. I had to put it on hold while my mother was visiting and I'm happy to have time to write again now. :)

Ah Molly II in this is the Molly II from the Midnight Run/Sparks stories. She's definitely an odd duck with her type-A personality and all-leather wardrobe, not to mention the mohawk and brightly colored hair. I didn't intend to do much more with her than her appearances in those stories, and this plot suddenly popped into my head. So I get to write her a lot more.

I do think Quidditch is a family trait, and her being Percy's daughter I think he would have encouraged it. He didn't play (that we know of from the books) but seemed to be a big fan. I think he'd get a big kick out of having a pro Quidditch daughter.

McCormack is a canon character, but I'm having to invent a personality for her myself ;) I liked the bit we learn about her from "Quidditch Through the Ages".

Thank you so much for the review! I'm really glad you liked it.


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