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Review:melpell says:
Fantastic, heartfelt, simple, and complex. It's so beautifully written like everything you write, but this feels so real, so true, so relatable. Sirius is probably my favorite HP character and its because he doesn't have to love Harry, he doesn't have to care about him but he chooses to anyway. Being abandoned by family or unwanted is hard to cope with and I feel that's the reason Sirius left behind numbers and notches and not names. It doesn't make it forgivable but to me, it at least makes it understandable. In my mind, I forgive Sirius for doing this to others. But your story makes me mad at Sirius all over again. During that time, growing up, finding who he is, he makes a mess but he is a mess. I feel he kind of fixes it with his love for Harry. Or starts to. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and I like that you included her name and definitely feel Sirius would be sorry for making her feel this way. This was so bittersweet, so many contradictory feelings, so perfectly written. Thanks for a different light to look at Sirius with, it's great : )

Author's Response: You give such lovely reviews! Really, they've totally made my day! I agree completely with everything you said about Sirius; his heart is in the right place, despite his past, and that's part of what makes him such a great character (one of my favorites as well!). Not quite forgivable, but understandable - perfectly said. And I love that even in such a short amount of time I could make you feel so strongly for Marian and her side! Man, with the grasp on Sirius that you have, I vote that you start writing fanfic, girl! Get it! haha Be warned: it's addicting! hehehe So basically you're wonderful and this review makes me so very, very happy! Thank you for taking the time to write it up!

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