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Review:nott theodore says:
Ahahaha that was brilliant! I totally didn't expect that ending, and it's great that you were able to add that in even though this is a parody!

It was great to see Rita making an appearance again, and I loved how disdainful she was of everything to do with her visit to Azkaban, and the fact that she thought she deserved star treatment. It's definitely something I can see Rita saying! I loved the way that she was determined to twist every nice thing that Lavender and Cho said to get her story as well.

The parody on all those too-quick make-ups was brilliant! In the last chapter Cho and Lavender were arrested for attacking each other and now they're best of friends? Hmm, I'm sure I believe that can happen ;) It made me laugh the way they were trying to get time off for good behaviour, teaching the other inmates facts and fashion advice!

Ooh, that ending! I totally didn't expect Luna to be the one who was behind it all, but there's the sneaky Claws for you! :P I can totally imagine her sitting there, stroking a pygmy puff like any true villain should... and Rita raising pygmy puffs? I'd love to see that happening!

This was a great story Kiana, and really fun to read! Well done!

Sian :)

Author's Response: Haha, I didn't really know what the ending was going to be until Luna floated into my mind and refused to live!

I'm glad that you liked her featuring again as she was so much fun to write! Of course she needed that treatment as she is a respected person of course!

I took inspiration of their make up from me and my sister when we need to be friends again to get something out of my mum. It works for us, but I guess not as well for those two! I always thought if I had the courage I would do that, so why not make those two do it!

Yup, you never know what we're going to be up to! I really want a pygmy puff so I want this happen, because she might give me one for a lower price! I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

Thanks for reviewing, Sian, it was always great to see what you thought!

-Kiana


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