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Review:ClaireAsh2617 says:
I love the start of this, you have no idea who the main character is and you introduce her, and her brother slowly - well done!

The ghost idea is really different as well, I like this idea, people seem to forget about the ghosts!

I like the humour you've introduced and the way you introduced Albus in - is this going to be a James/Lily relationship??! I'm looking forward to how that pans out! And the fact that you put Albus as the usual James type is interesting, but then I suppose they are Potters!

And the palm reader was a nice touch, Ellie's not the only one with a gift!

Really nicely written :)

Author's Response: Hello! I was worried about not revealing the main character this way, but I'm happy that you liked it.

Albus and Ellie may be like James and Lily. I change my mind every day about them. And I wanted to write Albus a little differently.

The palm reader scares me a little, but I'm glad you liked her.

Thanks for the review!

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