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Review:potterfan310 says:
Go Coral, sticking up for Al. Do I sense a crush developing!!!

Aww I love that their actually talking without an angry Albus!!! and I love the name 'Wayward Witches' it's got the song 'Carry on my wayward son' stuck in my head now :P

I really like this Albus, especially when he's calm and he actually seems like a normal teenage boy.

"Itís the same Rose who then punched me, for being a Ďscary cat'." - I love this purely because it reminds me of their parents back in third year!! :)

OMG!!! I am crying with laughter! Scorpius, oh god. Way to get out of a date. "I told her that I a boyfriend named Sergei who was my next door neighbor." - I dunno how the name came to you but all I can picture is the meerkat Sergei from the compare adverts and now I've got a weird mental image or Scorpius and a meerkat!! :p

Aww Yay Rocky's got a date!!! Just hope it doesn't make little old Albus jealous!

Can't wait for the next chappie.
10/10

-Potterfan310
Soph :)

Author's Response: A crush? Maybe, maybe not ;)

I know right! Even i love them talking normally without Albus being angry or showing any other negative emotion! :) I really like this Albus too!

Haha, that's the reason why i had Scorpius say that line!

Oh dearie me, what has Scorpius gotten himself into? It is indeed an effective way of getting out from a date but at what cost? But i'm glad it made you laugh! :D

Actually, just a little correction there - Rocky doesn't have a date! She rejected Nathan! Sorry if it was confusing! :(

I'll try to update as soon as i can! Thanks for the wonderful review Soph :)


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