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Review:silverashes says:
Hi, Hi!!

*dies of male related happiness* I LOVE Chris, Scorpius, and Al. Ohmigosh. I nearly died at them all being shirtless at the kitchen table. Who ever said someone can't fall in love with story characters? I'm guilty of falling in love with all three...oops!

I just can't stop gushing about your writing style! I wish I had it! I really do. You just have this thing where your writing is amusing. I'm not even sure if your trying to be funny, but it makes me giggle and smile while I read. Like the whole section about Chris being mitochondria and Ellie being a parasite. That was hilarious, but in a dry way. I hope I'm making sense! I love, love, love that about your writing!

BEN. That's all I have to say, right? I hope you can feel my excitement radiating from that single word. I've found a new favorite. I really like Amy too, but I think I'm latching on to Ben. He's got a dry sense of humor like Ellie. Bouncing from Ben to the Sorting Hat...MORE FORESHADOWING! You're really good at this whole foreshadowing shin-dig. The Sorting Hat is only further adding to all the weird comments Ellie has received (i.e. Regulus and the gypsie/seer woman)

Overall, another phenomenal chapter. I think I'll be adding this story to my favorites because you've gotten me hooked! I hope you don't mind me tagging along for the rest of the story! *insert many wonderful adjectives here*

xx Rachel

P.S. I have a favorite quote:

1. Scorpius shrugged at my earlier remark. “Why should it be? You’re practically one of the guys.”

2.“Yes, that’s what worries me.”
Okay, I guess that was two quotes, but they were hilarious and had tears streaming down my face!

Author's Response: Who doesn't love a little bit of that, am I right?

Ah, that means so much to me! Sometimes I try and be funny, and sometimes it just happens, so I'm really happy to hear that it works either way.

I know - BEN. Need one say more? There really isn't much of him in this chapter, but he'll be back, as well as Amy. And all the foreshadowing!

Thanks so much for this lovely review! It really made my day!


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