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Review:MargaretLane says:
I'm guessing they're right about all her ancestors dying in childbirth- the women, I mean.

*grins* Harry would be bound to understand how important finding out about her mother would be to Sally-Anne.

Hey, if each of those women died in childbirth, then what'd happen if the first child was a boy? I mean, we don't know they each died having their first child, but considering how young they were, it seems likely. Maybe it's part of whatever magic or whatever is going on. Not that we know they all died in childbirth, but certainly, it seems they each had a child before they died.

Since Benjamin is ridiculing the idea of her father playing Quidditch, I'm guessing he did.

Marta is probably looking for Benjamin, I'd guess.

Author's Response: You commented in a previous review that Sally-Anne's story sounded a bit like Harry's. I did that intentionally so he would be more inclined to help later, even if he's not aware of the significance of his help.

It's kind of frustrating that I can't put up the list I made that Sally-Anne keeps referring to. Your ponderings about what would happen if a boy were born are good, but you're right about some sort of magic affecting these women. More information to come!

I really enjoy reading about your thoughts and theories! I know you haven't read the prequel yet (at least, I don't think you have), and it's nice to hear that you're coming to the right conclusions about things (your last two sentences being perfect examples). Thank you so much for sharing them!

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