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Review:joy9494 says:
Can I just say how funny it was that we were paired together because I've actually already started reading your story. I'm sorry I have not reviewed before this, it was going to be one of those enjoy the reading now and then leave a lengthy review at the end sort of thing. Anywho on with the review, at first the idea of James having a sister like cousin seems a little cliche, but you do cliche well, and despite the possible marysueness that could occur Jen is still fun and enjoyable to read. I do like how you've depicted Severus and Lily together I feel like he is sometimes forgotten or pushed to the side in marauder fics. I think my only complaint is that the story it's self has a lot of potential for cliches, the Jen and Lily rivalry, Jen's close relationship with James, ect. I also feel like Jen's character jumps around a bit, which is understandable because she is so young that it's unlikely she has a strong sense of who she is. She's intelligent, yet head strong, and nice, and has a boyish sense of humor. I feel like she's too much, almost too contradictory, and like I said before be careful because she is in a position that could easily turn Mary sue. Anyway that being said I immensely enjoyed the story and it is super entertaining! I look forward to reviewing and reading more.

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that! Don't worry about it; I've been a silent reader plenty of times before.
Thank you so much for your thoughts! Jennifer definitely has a lot of possibilities for filling in different cliches, but I always found that it's more of the stereotype whenever James has a close family that she's best friends with Lily. There will be some stereotypes that I think people have seen before, but hopefully I can work it out well to a point where it doesn't seem so boring and typical! Thank you for reading and reviewing! (:

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