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Review:silverashes says:
Hello, lovely!

I'm happy to be back because your story keeps me entertained like no other. Ellie is hilarious. The entire first part on Regulus Black had me in tears. Your characterization of Ellie continually gets better and better! I adore reading about her! I forgot to tell you after the last chapter that I love Rose as well! Her character is developing into someone very lovable and humorous.

I think your plot is developing beautifully! I like how Regulus kind of foreshadowed some interesting events coming Ellie's way. Especially the fact that she has to tell Chris about her ability to speak to the dead. Meep! That might lead to some awkwardness and anger (hopefully not!). You throw little pieces of information into the story without it being overwhelming, like it's supposed to be just another detail. It makes reading the story so much more interesting. The reader has to read in between the lines a little to figure out what might happen in the future. I think that's really clever and interesting!

Overall, I think you have another WONDERFUL chapter! You're obviously an amazing writer, and your talent is coming out through your story! Lovely, lovely, lovely!

xx Rachel

P.S. I have a favorite quote from this chapter...well actually two!
1. "But not before she hit me right in the feels."
2. "Well played Mrs. P, well played."
Absolutely hilarious. This chapter had me in tears!

Author's Response: *blushes and dies*

I'm glad you find Ellie entertaining. I tried to write her that way, because for me, a good main character keeps me interested.

Yes - I hope there will be a lot more plot very soon. I've never written something that I've actually planned out in its entirety, so this whole foreshadowing thing is very new to me. Glad to hear that it's working!

Thank you so much, once again! You are far too kind, Rachel!


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