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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Yay, another Order chapter! I really enjoy this, because it's so exciting to see what's going on in the wider wizarding world what with the upcoming war and all this tension and ARGHNESS! And I really, really enjoyed this chapter.

Remus! I liked that we got to see a bit more of him this chapter, because he's just so adorable and lovable and every time he pops up I want to squeeze him. Unlike every time Peter pops up I want to say "PETER! YOU ARE AN IDIOT! AND YOU END UP LIVING YEARS AND YEARS AS A RAT! SO THERE!"

And Sirius with his smelly shoes, mwahahaha! And that Caradoc Dearborn is a very unpleasant man - he reminds me a little bit of Percy in his Ministry years, actually - how could he be so horrible to Sirius? Sirius is perfection, everyone knows that!

Ooh, Severus and Beth are going to meet again! How exciting!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: I know I've said it before, but I'm so happy you enjoy the Order chapters, because I was quite worried about them when I was writing them! I'm always trying to make sure my writing's not boring, you know. ;) It's obviously a rather important facet of the war, but reading about meetings isn't always fun.

I don't know what it was about Remus that made me so intimidated to write him, but of all the Marauders he's the one whose head I can get into the least. As such, he sort of faded into the background at times. It's always easier to yell at Peter than do anything with Remus!

Percyyy. ♥ Caradoc is a bit like Percy, but Percy's actually one of my favorite characters, so there's that.

Thank you for reviewing!!


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