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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This was such a funny one shot! I loved it! It's so quirky and unique, and the way you portrayed each death eater was so fluffy and not-scary, it was awesome! :)

Firstly, the whole setting of Ibiza is so comical and original. I would never in a million years picture death eaters hanging out there. The plot was so funny, and my favourite bit was definitely when Voldemort was doing the conga. How you managed to include that in the story, and make it believable is just incredible!

The pace is quite fast and engaging, and I loved how much detail you put in to the description. It certainly made it more believable and realistic, and the line in german added a really nice touch to the story as well :) I love it when people include foreign languages in their stories!

I loved the nod at sunburning english, hahah! And the whole little thing about Voldie's Vanity made me laugh so much! The roles you gave each of them was really witty, and I particularly liked how over dramatic everyone was. It fitted in perfectly with the task, and the last paragraph ended it with the same light hearted and humourous tone it had begun with.

The resentment in Lucius ( hahah I thought his role as Bellatrix's hair expert was awesome) against Snape was very well played out, and all the odd things Snape enjoyed from his drink on the plane to his Luna Lovegood couture shirt was original and a tad on the barmy side. The band "Harry's Hipsters" is pure genius as well!

Overall, a really awesome one shot that I thoroughly enjoyed reading! 10/10!

Sophie :D

Author's Response: Sophie!

I'm so glad that you loved the setting! I honestly thought people would question my sanity when reading it, but no one has so far so I can still live in hope! Erm, the only thing I can say is probably desperation when I'm insanely tired.

Yeah, I guess the pace was meant to match their flow of thought in the way. I'm so glad that you loved the description though as this was rather different to my usual, so a lot more fun! I love that too!

Of course I had to include the nod, it wouldn't be true to the Ibiza tradition otherwise! I'm so glad that you loved the roles, because that's the best thing about AU, you can really make them your own.

I'm so glad that you liked each of their own roles, because I was worried it would only be me! Thanks for this amazing review, Sophie, it really made my day :D

-Kiana


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