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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Eeek! Oh my god I loved this chapter so much! I seriously adored it. Delighted in it. Treasured it. Worshiped it. Well, I didn't quite worship it, but you get the idea. And I realized there are not many good synonyms for loved! And yes, I did try looking them up in the thesaurus. THAT'S HOW MUCH I REVERED THIS CHAPTER! (I'm not a 100% sure of the definition of revered - my vocabulary is shamefully small.)

Anyway, there was so much perfection about this chapter. The whole thing was perfection! The conversation between Severus and Beth was just AMAZING and, as usual, so realistic and exciting to read and intense - I was hooked and couldn't take my eyes from the screen. I can't WAIT to see how their relationship develops from here - it's certainly going to be difficult!

And Sirius' point of view! Love, love, LOVE! But I am now seriously conflicted - Sirius and Beth or Severus and Beth? IT'S SO HARD TO CHOOSE! Although in saying that the impression I got from this chapter was that Severus definitely didn't love Beth, but felt lonely - and we've seen how moody lonely Sirius gets in OoTP.

Onto the next chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! :) And all the synonyms you looked up made me laugh, too, and seeing as how I've been thrust back into the throes of schoolwork, I need a laugh every now and again for sure!

Severus and Beth have many long-overdue conversations, but rest assured that they're coming. :) There's still a lot of tension between the pair of them at this point, but I'm just really excited FOR you to see developments! I just skimmed this whole thing anew and was grinning like an idiot; I stand by what I said in the author's note. I really do love that chapter. ♥

Aaand of course, Sirius at the end. If there was a broken heart symbol, it'd go here. Sirius absolutely and definitely does not love Beth, but he wants to, and he's tricking himself into believing that. He is lonely, very much so, and moody!Sirius is always a good time.

Thank you for the review! ♥


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