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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Hi again! Sorry I haven't been reviewing much as I've been reading through these chapters. Anyway, I liked the insight into Tor's sorting and how the hat thinks she'll eventually doubt her house. I wonder where it wanted to put her, I think Gryffindor.

The scene with Malfoy and the Association of Slytherin Students was interesting. And while I understand the need or feeling for them to need to stick together, I think it's weird that Malfoy would ask them for help. I thought he was very secretive about it in the book so it just seems odd to me that he'd want someone else's help, he seems too proud for it. Although I'm not surprised by his bragging about it. That is so Draco.

I am a little curious to know if there will be something romantic happening between Tor and Theo at any point. Tor does seem to have a bit of a crush but I don't know if he feels the same way.

Anyhow, I think you're doing a great job with this story. The next chapter sounds interesting so I hope to get to that soon.

xxEnigmaticEyes16

Author's Response: Hello! :) That's perfectly alright, I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far, or at least enough to read on! I'm a little self-conscious about these early chapters, so getting positive feedback is very encouraging for me.

I'm glad you found the scene with the group interesting. I agree, Malfoy isn't really the teamwork type, I imagined him more lording his new power over the others before realizing what the real implications and dangers for being a Death Eater are. He's a slippery character, but I do enjoy writing him in this story! :)

You're right, Tor does have a little crush on him, doesn't she? :P As for if anything happens between them, you'll just have to keep reading and find out, but Theo is certainly a very important character in the story!

Thank you so much for following this story and taking the time to leave a lovely review! I hope that you enjoy the next chapter if you do get a chance to read on. :)


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