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Review:silverashes says:
Hello again!

Another beautiful chapter! I might just plow my way through the whole story today. I'm supposed to be finishing up the mountain of school work that I have, but, alas, more important things call (i.e. this story)

Again I think Dom was written wonderfully. She reacted in a way that anyone would. You didn't sugar coat it and make her handle it with just a few tears. She lashed out at her family (which was sad and heartbreaking, but it was so realistic).

I love the way her family and Teddy are continuing to treat her like she's exactly the same. Maybe that will change as time goes on, but I really hope it doesn't! They love her for who she is, regardless of her becoming a werewolf. I think they reacted just how any victim would hope!

Lovely, lovely, lovely!

xx Rachel

Author's Response: Hey Rachel.

Thanks a ton once again for reviewing!

I am pleased you liked this chapter too. I'd love it if you could read all the chapters up so far and give your opinion. School work is always a pain anyway, haha.

I am glad you liked the way I wrote Dom and her reactions. I put myself in her shoes and knew I'd definitely lash out if I were in her place so I did that, good to know you found it realistic

I feel that family and love is all about treating someone just the same unconditionally, and that's what I've shown here. I am pleased you liked that.

Thank you once again!


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