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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Okay, I can't comprehend how I haven't reviewed this already D:

I remember reading this chapter back when you posted it, and also writing a review, but maybe there was some internet connection problem (which happens a lot with me) and the review didn't get posted. Anyhow, I'll review this one quick, and move on to the next chapter and review that in detail, assuming your request on that one since chapter ten is the one I haven't read yet (and I am dying to read it).

So, this was a shocking chapter, to say the least. The way the 'secret' is revealed made me so nervous and now I am really anxious to see what Salazar's reaction would be towards Helga and where is their relationship headed.

The events flowed naturally, as always, and the emotions were so well depicted I felt like I was a part of them. The entire boggart scene had me hooked, it was written awesomely.

Your descriptions throughout, as always, were impeccable, and so was your dialogue. I quite liked the ending interaction between Rowena and Helga - I love reading these snippets of Rowena, it makes me want to read more about her. You have crafted her well.

I think Godric was characterised amazingly here. You showed his discomfort very well, and the way he talked to Salazar was well-suited to his personality. I liked him a lot here and felt sorry for him too. I am anxious for his and Salazar's relations now as well. Wonder how things are going to turn out.

You really shouldn't have requested a review from me since I'd review you anyway but thanks for requesting anyway. It's such a pleasure to read this story and I am sorry to see it almost reach it's end. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for the sequel and you must let me know when you post it!

Great chapter as always, moving on to the next. Apologies for this horribly rushed review!

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

P.S. Good luck for the Dobbies! I hope you win xD

Author's Response: Hi again AD! I'm finally back to respond to this lovely review :) I always love to get your thoughts, rushed or not, so don't worry about a thing!

This boggart scene was an interesting one to write; I'm very glad everyone's emotions came through! I think boggarts can be very telling, and I wanted everyone to have the chance to see this physical representation of all the Founders' greatest fear (or insecurity, in Rowena's case.) And then I thought, what better way to start revealing the secret than to have it tied in with someone's fear?

I have never loved Godric more than I do in this chapter. I have to admit that he was on my nerves in some of the earlier ones, but I wanted to really show that he does have some depth after all. He is a great leader and protector, and he values Salazar's friendship highly. I hope some of that showed through with him :)

Thanks again for the amazing review, and just for taking so much time for this story in general! I'm so incredibly appreciative of every review you leave. I'm hard at work on chapter 11 now, and I hope to get it ready for the queue very soon!

--Maggie


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