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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:

I've read your Neville one shot, so I was excited to see your penname on this one! Your summary captivated me... and I think it will be so cool to see Nymphadora Tonks - the lovable Hufflepuff, turn bad.

This was a really good first chapter! You stayed true to her character - her clumsyness was PERFECT!

I liked how you incorporated Bellatrix into this as well. Her striking resemblance to Andromeda, and Tonks spluttering... very well done.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Heya! Thank you for being the first to review my newest story and my first real WIP (although I do plan to make Soul Pieces a longer story as well).

Yes, the idea of sweet, cheerful, lovable Tonks turning into a darker Tonks does seem captivating. I wrote this for a challenge, but rather than writing a one shot I decided to take it further, give it time to happen, so that the change seems natural rather than forced.

I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed her characterisation. Tonks is not the most difficult character I had to write, but she does pose a threat. If I'm not careful I might go overboard with her clumsiness haha.

Bellatrix has not made her appearance yet, but I remembered that when Harry first met Andromeda he was stricken by the resemblance between Bellatrix and Andromeda, so I decided to play with this thought a little, give a sense of what it's really going to be like standing in front of the real Bellatrix. Plus, I thought that the moment when the two sisters would look most alike was when they were mad, because when you are angry features tend to give the same facial expression, rather than when you express positive emotions. Add the fact that Andromeda and Bellatrix have a physical resemblance and you get a massive shock ;)

Thanks again for stopping by and taking the time to read and leave your thoughts!

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