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Review:adluvshp says:

Wow, this was an impressive one-shot. I liked your characterisation of Regulus. Your descriptions were very real and I could feel his emotions throughout. The nervousness, the fear, the vulnerability, and at the same time, the desire to please his family and his 'master' was all very evident.

There were parts that gave me chills, especially the segment where Regulus is remembering about the 'tests' he had been put through, as well as the ending. I felt for poor Regulus, and at the same time disliked him for his choice, which was impressive.

It flowed really well throughout, and I didn't spot any grammar errors either.

Great job!

Author's Response: Hey there!

I'm glad you thought so! I actually enjoyed writing it so much that I've gone ahead and started on an entire novel based around Regulus, which should be interesting!

Thank you for reading!

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