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Review:MargaretLane says:
*grins* Parvati sounds sensible.

And I love the way you bring in Crookshanks annoying people and Hermione defending him no matter what.

Absolutely LOVE the name of the shop. It's perfect.

The dog is Sirius?! It took me a while to catch on to that. I didn't until he responded to the mention of the imaginary friend. I keep forgetting this is Prisoner of Azkaban era. I think it's because the story is so separate; I mean it's about something completely different to Prisoner of Azkaban, so I forget the two things are happening simultaneously.

Hmm, I'm wondering what being colour blind has to do with anything.

Author's Response: I know Parvati and Lavender aren't given very much character development in the books, so I decided to make Parvati the more sensible of the two. I'm glad you seem to like her like that!

I did my best to be as close to canon as possible without bring in very many PoA events (due to copyright issues). For instance, I could see Crookshanks bothering everyone. And Sally-Anne is even a canon character (she was only mentioned one time in PS and not even assigned a House).

Yup, Sally-Anne has met Sirius. I know you haven't read the prequel yet, but the significance of this moment will be made clear by Chapter 11. I can completely understand how you can forget this is going on during PoA events. I figured that not everyone in the school knows the connection between Sirius and Harry, nor would everyone care as much as the Golden Trio. But this story started in the Marauders era, so I wanted to bring as many Marauders into the sequel as I possibly could. :)

Tee hee, yes, color blindness in dogs definitely helps me continue to keep the story canon. More information about this will be revealed in upcoming chapters that I haven't even written yet.

(And I'm so sorry I took a month and a half to start responding to your dedicated reviews! I hope you can forgive me!)


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