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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for Slytherin review tag =)

This was a very sweet story, and I think it fit well with the House Cup theme. I enjoyed your portrayal of Molly, of how she was overshadowed by Victoire during graduation and didn't feel at home there, and then found her "home" with Lucas. The memory idea was very nice too and flowed well. I liked the ending too, of how she apparated thinking about home and reached Lucas. It put a smile on my face. It was fluffy and nice, and yet not overdone. I didn't see any grammar errors either which is awesome.

Great job!
Cheers,
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the late reply. I tend not to really check reviews for this story since it's a one-shot I wrote quite a while ago. But I'm glad you liked it. I didn't think I was very good at writing romantic fluff at all, so I'm glad you thought I did well. Thanks for the lovely review. I have a prequel/sequel in the works for this, that you can check out once it's out of the works, but knowing me I'm quite slow so that'll probably take a while.

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