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Review:silverashes says:
Hello there!

Well to start things off I have to say that you have one of the most beautiful writing styles I've ever seen! Honestly! Everything flows so wonderfully, and the details are immaculate! I feel like I'm standing with the characters watching everything unfold! I really felt the overall atmosphere of the story.

Your characterization of Dominique was wonderful! There really isn't anything to point out! Her fear felt so real to me that it was like I was part of the character. You flawlessly wove her background into the story without overwhelming the reader. She's a very believable character. There were two unique factors that stuck out to me. One that she was dating Teddy Lupin, and two that she was in Ravenclaw instead of Gryffindor. I love it! I think these details really set her apart from all other Dominiques on the site!

The pace of the story (so far) I think is fine! It's not too face and not too slow. You built up her background and surroundings to set the scene. The cliffhanger ending will really catch a reader's attention, making them want to come back and read more!

Overall I think you have a wonderful beginning! I'm very interested in what will happen throughout the rest of the story!

xx Rachel

Author's Response: Hey there!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am so pleased that you like my writing style, liked all the details, and enjoyed my characterisation of Dominique.

It's great to know you find Dominique believable. I have seen many variations of her on the site too, but my version of her is quite different, and I am happy you liked that, along with the details.

It's a relief that you liked the pace, and the way I set the scene. I love cliffhangers xD

Thanks a ton for reading and reviewing! I will be back to re-request!

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